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Beautiful at first glance.
Perfect pink petals,
long green stem,
and sparkling, shimmering leaves-
Make way for judgements.
Kindness.
Gentleness.
Perfection.
Upon touch-
Painful.
Hurtful.
Unexpected.
Sharp thorns
rip through the skin,
and red blood drips onto the floor.
Daggers on such a
Beauty.
Unexpected in such
Perfection.
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Was looking through tearz-fearz stock, found this picture: [link] and FINALLY got back some inspiration to write a new poem...
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I'm not going any further, I want to see how you interpret it :)

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Thank you SO much tearz-fearz

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:iconsnapthefox:
Awsome!! i love it :+fav:

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Rothchild spetic suckers,

"Service with a smile! Even on the hot days!"STF
:iconartisticallychalleng:
Thank you!!! :hug: :hug: :blowkiss:

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"Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow." ~James Dean

:flagcanada: + :shamrock:
:iconsnapthefox:
^^ yer welcome!!

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Rothchild spetic suckers,

"Service with a smile! Even on the hot days!"STF
:icontearz-fearz:
Mm..you did a wonderful job with this poem! I think I would have faved it anyway because you used such wonderful words!

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My Poetry= ~bled-for-you
:iconartisticallychalleng:
Thanks!!!! I definitely appreciate it, and I thank you again for the picture! I've been looking for inspiration, and something hit me when I saw your photo, and I just started writing!!! So thank you, VERY much :)

:hug:

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"Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow." ~James Dean

:flagcanada: + :shamrock:
:iconbrytini:
:heart:

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"Preach not to others what they should eat, but eat as becomes you, and be silent."

- Epictetus
:iconartisticallychalleng:
hehe thanks :hug:

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"Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow." ~James Dean

:flagcanada: + :shamrock:
:iconsoulburntdown77:
That's beautiful.. I don't usually like poems of this sort, but you make it work. Good job!

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Hope you're all right..It's been rough for me

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